The Redback Leftovers
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Title, red back leftovers
Author , Debra Oswald.
Time it was set, modern time .
Will fisher gast got kicked out of the first grand teem and placed in a third grad teem.
Those was really bad, but luckily to very caring coaches Sal and Emilio turn the team around and win the grand final. If you like soccer you will enjoy it
chloe arcus
Hollie
The Redback Leftovers
Debra Oswald
Will Fisher’s got a lot to handle this season. He’s had a fight with his dad (the coach of the first grade team) so he ended up in the leftovers, a team full of weirdos and rejects. He’s got a crush on the girl making a video about the team. Now 2 crazy Italian coaches come and coach Wills team and terns the whole team around.
Will the leftovers win the big game or will they fall apart completely.
6/5/08
My story is called the Red back leftovers.
The author is called Debra Oswald.
My book is about a boy names Will Fisher and he plays soccer and he used to love soccer but he does not any more he just is not interested in it anymore. But he still plays it.
He has made it into this team and the team is full of rejects and weirdos. But there is just one girl that he really likes she and she video cameras the boys playing soccer.
They have very strange Italian blokes as there coaches and there names are Sal and Emilio they are very supportive and are always bringing these Italian people to the games and they are always screaming out to them in Italian and they have no idea what they are saying. The red back leftovers are a very bad team but since they had Sal and Emilio they have won nearly every game and they made it into the semi final and they won. The week after one player broke an arm another player had the chicken pox’s and the other player had a sickness and the only player that was left was Will Fisher and another guy named Stefan and Stefan was very mad at will because will punched Stefan in the face. But on the day every one showed up and they won and there was a big celebration and Will and Nicky kissed and they had a massive celebration out on the soccer field and everyone joins in and they have a massive soccer on the soccer field.
By Lauren Fulivai
The book I was reading is called the Red Back Leftovers It’s all about a boy
Who has played soccer his whole life and is now under First grader and did
Not make it so they were called the red back leftovers and there was a companion
On T.V so a girl named Nicky decided to go in the competition and won really
The Red Back Leftovers was a about friendship and about how much they cared for
Each other.
Ashley
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